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Some vapid art.
Image size
2019x1454px 1023.17 KB
Make
HP
Model
HP pstc4200
Date Taken
May 13, 2011, 5:14:23 PM
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This is very good. The chest and abdomen are especially well-done, very detailed and believable. Really, the only big critiques I have are the following:
- while the pose is good, it could be much more relaxed
- as with much of your stuff, I think you need some more confidence.
It's a weird thing to give as a critique, but confidence or lack thereof always shows in line-heavy art. Shaky, hesitant, or "furry" lines show that you're scared of leaving bold, lasting marks or making mistakes. A lot of the time, hesitant lines can rob a piece of a lot of energy, and can stretch out the time needed to draw a picture. A lot of people our age have this problem, especially the fussy girls I sometimes run into in lifedrawing. They come in with 5H pencils and sit there with their noses on the paper for three hours, stepping away with work that just looks weak.
As you work, just think about being brave with your strokes. You're so good that I really don't think you have any business being hesitant. Be confident! You deserve it.
- while the pose is good, it could be much more relaxed
- as with much of your stuff, I think you need some more confidence.
It's a weird thing to give as a critique, but confidence or lack thereof always shows in line-heavy art. Shaky, hesitant, or "furry" lines show that you're scared of leaving bold, lasting marks or making mistakes. A lot of the time, hesitant lines can rob a piece of a lot of energy, and can stretch out the time needed to draw a picture. A lot of people our age have this problem, especially the fussy girls I sometimes run into in lifedrawing. They come in with 5H pencils and sit there with their noses on the paper for three hours, stepping away with work that just looks weak.
As you work, just think about being brave with your strokes. You're so good that I really don't think you have any business being hesitant. Be confident! You deserve it.